The Masked Intruder

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This story was written as a personal commission – which the commissioning gentleman has kindly agreed for me to share. It does contain elements of Consenting to Non-Consent


It had been a fun evening at the restaurant – my wife Shannon, her sister Darcy and I – delicious food, chatting, laughing, a little flirtation.  Darcy then agreed to come back to ours for a couple more drinks

I drove the three of us home and the atmosphere in the car was jovial.  I had had one beer, but nothing more so was happy to drive.  At one point I thought I noticed the car behind taking all the exact same turns as us – but I laughed it off, thinking I had watched too many police shows

We went inside and I poured the three of us drinks.  Darcy and Shannon wanted a glass of wine and I poured myself a Scotch.  All of us collapsed comfortably onto the couch and big seats, relaxed in each other’s company.  Conversation flowed easily between us

Suddenly there was an abrupt bang against the door and a masked man forced his way into the room.  The two women gasped at the sight of the gun and I could tell they were holding back their hysteria.  I wanted to do something to defend them, but knew that for now, the safest thing for all of us was just to comply with his demands

We obediently moved onto the couch together as he commanded

He pointed the gun towards us, aiming it specifically at Darcy.  I could sense her trembling beside me, and I longed to reassure her

The gunman shouted at Darcy, instructing her to tie Shannon up.  I could see Darcy’s reluctance.  “Go on” I whispered encouragingly.  “Just do what he asks, and we will be okay”

I watched Darcy as she tied Shannon’s arms and legs to the chair.  Darcy’s long brown curls rippled as her body shook with fear

It was almost like the gunman could sense me watching Darcy

He shouted at her as she finished tying Shannon.  “Strip for me, Bitch”

Darcy’s eyes welled with tears, but she started removing her clothing.  She unbuttoned the front of her dress and slowly let it fall from her shoulders

Despite the situation, I could not help but notice the incredibly sexy underwear she had on.  A pale blue cut away bra barely concealed her nipples.  Paired with a matching tiny thong

She reached behind her back and unhooked her bra, revealing her full breasts.  Finally, she peeled off the little thong, exposing herself fully

“Down on your knees” the gunman asserted.  A sob escaped from her mouth as she assumed the position, clearly terrified of what might be about to happen next

The man turned his attention to me, telling me to drop my jeans and boxers, and to get in front of Darcy.  I could feel the anger rising inside me and I shouted back at him “What the hell is wrong with you?”

I felt the butt of the gun impact my back and I cried out – as much with shock as with pain.  I unbuttoned my jeans and pushed them and my boxers down to the floor

“Cock in her mouth” he growled at me ominously.  I looked over at Shannon.  I could see the tears in her eyes.  “I am sorry” I mouthed

“It is okay, just do as he says” she murmured with a hint of an encouraging smile

The man glared at us both, cross at the delay.  He grabbed Shannon’s hair, tugging her head backwards.  I hated the sound of her whimpers.  “What are you waiting for?” he shouted aggressively at me

I reached for Darcy’s head and pulled her mouth onto my cock.  I could tell she did not like having to do it, but knew she had no other options and so opened her mouth wide for me

Her head started bobbing up and down as she sucked on my cock.  Although it was a horrible scene, I could not help getting hard in her warm mouth

The man was clearly enjoying the sight.  “Oh yeah, she likes that” he cheered as Darcy sucked.  Turning towards Shannon he jeered, “Look at the sight of your husband’s cock in her mouth”

I tried to ignore his chants; I knew I had to contain my anger for all our sake’s.  Instead, I focused on Darcy’s mouth as it worked up and down my erection

Shannon was trying to stifle her sobs and Darcy’s slurps were becoming more audible as she drooled on my cock

“Enough” the gunman interrupted.  “Get behind her now”

I knew exactly what was coming.  “No, no I’m not doing that” I pleaded with him

I saw his gloved hand rise up and then land in my kidneys – once and then again.  It knocked me off balance and I fell to the floor.  Luckily the strike was less hard that I thought it was going to be, but I knew I could not protest further

“Just do it” I heard Shannon mutter through her sobs

Slowly, I got back to my feet and positioned myself behind Darcy’s rounded arse cheeks

I hesitated; I just could not bring myself to do it.  Darcy’s soft hand reached around, and she positioned the head of my cock against her pussy.  I was surprised to feel her wetness.  She pushed her hips backwards, sliding herself onto my cock

I started to thrust, matching her movements.  She felt so tight around my cock and I could feel my climax starting to build.  As she continued to writhe on my cock, I could not hold back any longer and I felt myself exploding inside her

The gunman’s laughter filled the air.  “Jacking off into your Sister-in-laws pussy.  Good show”

And with that he turned and left

We were all in a state of shock.  We quickly untied Shannon.  Shannon and Darcy clung to each other.  Darcy mentioned she had a friend in the police and that he might deal with things more quickly, so I put in a call to him

Over the next few days, Darcy kept us informed that the police were investigating but they found no leads

That night I just needed to get out on my own for a bit.  I went to the local pub to enjoy a beer and clear my head

I bumped into an old friend.  I had not seen him in ages, yet there were elements of his mannerisms and his accent that seemed familiar, but I just could not place why

He was easy to talk to and I needed someone to listen.  I told him the story of what had happened.  And then shockingly, I made a confession

I told him how I had actually found a lot of what happened very arousing.  How I almost enjoyed it.  I felt bad saying the words out loud

And then he said something far more shocking.  He confessed that he had been the gunman that night

A million emotions surged through me – confusion, anger, incredulity.  “What?  How could you?  Why?” I began, my mind swirling with questions

“Why?” he repeated.  “Well, because Darcy asked me to do it”


A few nights later, Shannon and I went over to Darcy’s.  She had a hot tub at the back of her house.  It felt lovely to be outside and in the hot water, but it was also surrounded by hedges and so felt very secluded.  We all wanted a relaxed evening, and this felt like the perfect option

We sat happily in the bubbling water, chatting and sipping at brightly coloured, slightly too strong cocktails that Darcy had made for us

Suddenly the atmosphere changed, I saw the look of fear on Shannon’s face.  “Oh no, no, no” she cried

“Oh yes, yes, yes” came a menacing voice.  My head whipped round, and I saw the sight of the gunman.  His face once again masked and with an evil glint in his eyes

I felt a wave of confusion washed over me.  Shock that Darcy was doing this again, empathy for Shannon and how afraid she was obviously feeling.  The sight of the gunman made my heart pound, I still felt fear but also a shocking surge of excitement and arousal

I was grateful for the water hiding my growing hard on

“You three were such fun last time, I could not keep away” the man cackled ominously.  “Behave yourselves and none of you should get hurt.  Well not badly, at least”

I glanced at Darcy.  Her face was a picture of distress, not giving away a hint of her role in this

The gunman grabbed a fistful of Darcy’s long hair, tugging upwards and forcing her to stand

Her beautiful body trembled slightly with fear.  Her bikini clung to her curves and droplets of water ran down her body

The man grabbed at the strings of her bikini top, pulling it undone and wrenching it from her body.  Darcy squealed in horror, her arms closing across her full breasts trying to conceal her nakedness

He repeated with her bikini bottoms and then stared at her lecherously

Then he proceeded to walk around the hot tub towards Shannon.  I could see the tension rising in her body as he approached her.  “Your turn” he smirked.  A look of panic crossed her face, I knew she was hoping he was not going to strip her as well

Instead, he grabbed her wrists and pulled them behind her back where he secured them with Darcy’s bikini top

Starring at her he growled “Open wide”.  Shannon’s hesitation earned her a firm slap across the cheek.  She whimpered and opened her mouth despondently.  The man forced the gusset of Darcy’s bikini briefs into Shannon’s mouth and then he used the strings to secure the makeshift gag in place

The man stood behind Shannon and his hands moved to her breasts – caressing them idly through the thin material of her wet swimsuit top.  A first tear trickled down Shannon’s cheek

“Showtime now” the man exclaimed, pinching Shannon’s nipples as he did so

He instructed Darcy to sit on the edge of the hot tub, so just her legs remained in the water.  Then he beckoned to me.  “Go and suck on those big titties of hers” he told me

I hated the way the man spoke to me, the feeling of him being in control, the sight of him manhandling my wife’s breasts.  Yet the idea of sucking on Darcy’s pert boobs made my cock throb

I moved through the water to Darcy.  I looked up at her apologetically, “I’m sorry” I whispered

She managed a tiny smile.  “It’s okay.  I know we just have to do as he says so we all get out of this safely” she said so convincingly

I brought my mouth to her left breast, kissing the soft flesh and then starting to suck on her hard nipple.  I moved to the other side and repeated.  A barely audible moan of pleasure escaped from Darcy’s lips

I heard a sharp intake of breath from Shannon and could imagine the gunman’s hands tightening around her breasts

“Look at your husband sucking away on your sister’s big titties” he jeered as he watched.  “But I think it might be time for his mouth to go a bit lower now”

My head jerked around.  “For fuck’s sake.  No!” I asserted

He landed a hard slap across Shannon’s breasts and she cried out with shock and pain.  Then a second landed and a third

“I can keep going until you get started” he sneered

I hated seeing him hurting Shannon and I instantly lowered my mouth to between Darcy’s legs.  Her pussy was just inches above the line of the water

She was incredibly wet beneath my mouth and I knew this was nothing to do with the hot tub.  I tasted her juices with my tongue, so sweet and delicious

I could not help but start running my tongue between her pussy lips, lapping at her over and over.  She could not hide the pleasure running through her body.  Her back arched and her hips started to grind

Her hands moved to my head and she pushed me more firmly against her.  That gesture felt so incredibly erotic

“Look at the greedy whore” the man’s voice punctuated the air

I ignored his words and buried my face deeper against Darcy.  I felt her thighs trembling and her hips thrusting towards me.  As I licked and sucked, she started to cry out and her body bucked frantically as her orgasm overwhelmed her.  Her juices filled my mouth as a second climax crashed over her and her moans became more animalistic

As her body stilled, the gunman grunted.  “Such a dirty little slut”

And with that he released his grip on Shannon’s breasts and started to exit the garden.  With one backward glance he called out “No point even calling the police this time, you know they won’t catch me”.  And with that he was gone


At the next opportunity I had, I confronted Darcy

I felt cross and embarrassed, but I knew I had to say something for Shannon’s sake

“Look Darcy….” I began hesitantly.  “I know, ummm, what you, ummm, organised” 

She opened her eyes wide and looked at me quizzically

“The gunman, I know you are behind it” I managed

“Would I?” she retorted in mock innocence

I held her stare.  “I know you are.  But you can’t, it isn’t fair on Shannon”

With that, Darcy just started to laugh

I could feel the irritation rising inside me

“Look, did you not see how scared your sister was?” I continued more assertively

“Then she is a very convincing actress” retorted Darcy

“What?” I said in confusion

“I said she is a very convincing actress” Darcy repeated.  “It was Shannon who suggest this idea to me in the first place”

I just stared at her

“She likes the man restraining her, giving her some pain.  I like the feeling of being exposed and forced to do things” she went on

“And…” she added, “…. I know you secretly enjoy me”

I continued just staring

She lifted one finger to my jaw and closed my mouth.  She placed one finger over my lips.  “But let’s forget we had this conversation; I don’t want to ruin the spell.  I want to be able to imagine the gunman is for real each time, to maximise my thrills”


Life got busy and three weeks had passed before we could next spend time with Darcy.  It was agreed she would come to ours for the evening

We chatted and ate, we sipped wine and watched Saturday night shows on TV.  I could feel the anticipation in the air

By the time it was nearly midnight, we realised we had all had a few glasses of wine and Shannon suggested Darcy stay over in the spare room

I felt a sense of disappointment as I climbed into bed – I had been hoping, expecting that the gunman would make an appearance again.  Nonetheless, I quickly drifted off to sleep


About an hour later, adrenaline and fear surged through me as I was abruptly awakened by the cold metal of a gun pushed against my neck and the ominous voice whispering “Wakey, wakey” in my ear

Despite everything I now knew, a cold chill still passed through me.  I wanted to fight back and defend the women, but knew I could not against this armed intruder

I quickly looked around me, taking in the scene

Darcy stood on one side of the room, her big brown eyes open wide, looking scared and vulnerable in her skimpy nightie

The masked man was bundling Shannon out of bed and onto the floor.  She was wearing a little vest and shorts

“Careful with her” I shouted angrily

The man just looked back at me and laughed

He forced Shannon onto her knees and started to use rope to bind her wrists together behind her and then tie them to her ankles.  She was left with very little ability to move

Then he turned his attention to Darcy.  He walked towards her and then gripped the fabric of her nightie in each hand.  He literally ripped the garment open and dropped it on the floor.  She cried out with shock, but her body looked aroused and needy

“Bend over” the man commanded, placing her hands on the arms of the comfortable chair in the corner of our bedroom

Darcy obliged but her legs visibly trembled in her exposed position

“Don’t you dare move” he instructed her harshly

Finally, his gaze moved to me.  “Get up.  Get those disgusting boxers off”

I wanted to argue.  He saw the hint of defiance in my eyes, and he turned the gun, pointing it towards Darcy’s rounded butt cheeks

I dropped my stare and obligingly removed my boxers

He put his hands on my shoulders and guided me across the room.  I hated the feel of his hands on my skin, but I did not dare resist

He positioned me in front of Shannon.  My hardening cock bobbed in front of her face

Addressing Shannon, he delivered his cruel words.  “His big hard cock is going up your little sister’s arsehole very shortly.  Your slobber is all the lube she is getting, so I suggest you start slobbering”

Both women gasped and I let out a low growl.  Shannon quickly got to work, wrapping her mouth around my cock.  In her restrained position she had very little control.  All I could do was thrust in and out of her mouth as she drooled on my cock, coating it in her slobber as she tried to make me as wet and slippery as possible

Moments later, the man shouted, “Time is up” and he grabbed Shannon’s hair, roughly pulling her off my cock

He moved with me towards Darcy.  I watched as he placed his big hands on her arse cheeks and peeled them apart.  “Such a tight little hole” he observed menacingly

Stepping away, he strode back across the room.  With one hand, he held the gun against Shannon’s temple, with the other he rubbed the outline of her pussy through her fitted shorts

“Get on with it” he growled at me

I held Darcy’s arse cheeks apart and whispered an apology to her.  I pressed the head of my cock against her tight hole and heard her first sharp intake of breath

“Get on with it” he repeated, more loudly

I pushed gently, easing the tip of my cock into her.  Darcy moaned softly as I started to stretch her opening

I knew I had no choice.  I pushed again, forcing her body to take more of me into her

Darcy cried out, the pain more evident in her voice this time

I paused, trying to give her body time to adjust

“Don’t make me pull this trigger”, he threatened, his voice ominous

“Just do it” Darcy cried, willing to accept the pain for the sake of her sister

I gripped her hips and pushed harder this time, impaling her on every inch of my thick cock.  Darcy whimpered desperately

I could feel my balls against her wet pussy, and I started to thrust in and out of her

The tone of Darcy’s cries changed, I could tell the pain was turning to pleasure and arousal

She felt so incredibly tight around my throbbing cock and I knew I would not last long

I glanced at Shannon, the gunman’s hand still stimulating her through her shorts, the material becoming damper and clinging to her slickness

My grip on Darcy tightened and my strokes became deeper and more powerful.  Her body bucked in my hands as an intense climax washed over her.  As her body tensed and tightened around me, she triggered my release and I pumped ropes of thick cum into her arsehole

The gunman laughed once again.  He stared at Darcy, “You filthy slut.  You have an arsehole filled with his cum.  Taking it in your arsehole with only your sister’s spit for lube.  You whore”

He pulled her fingers away from Shannon’s pussy and very deliberately licked her juices from his fingers

And then he turned and left once again

The scene felt dirty, debauched and depraved.  Yet I had never experienced anything nearly as exciting and exhilarating before.  I was completely hooked

I looked from Shannon to Darcy.  “What a terrible man he is.  I just hope he never returns” I lied.  They both nodded in complete agreement.  I knew we all could not wait for him to return

6 thoughts on “The Masked Intruder”

  1. An interesting concept. Simply written. Not too elaborate. How much input did the patron have? Did he just give you a general outline and leave the rest up to you? Or did he have more input specifically? Less detail or elaboration then I would normally expect from your writing.

    1. Thank you. He set the scene of the first intruder break in and that he then met the intruder. The rest was all up to me to come up with. I really rather enjoyed writing it – had to give the plot a little thought! x

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